The song is nice yall just need more feeling in your verses and the hook it kind of just sound like yall are talking on the mic other than that yall be good
Get some studio time practice and practice to get your verses on point down from the breaths between bars and how you come in and how you flow thru the song it'll go a long way! Keep up the grind tho...
I like to hear lyrics on beats to really get the feel of what your saying and its better for you to spit it cuz we can read your work but won't say it how you wrote it so might not be as tight as its suppose to be