Make the cuts accoridng to parts of the beat, like hi hats, snares, kicks. Also add more b roll, b roll meaning footage that is relevant to the video to evoke emotion but not a performance take. add small details in with the b roll like close ups of items or movements.
Very texas, he needs way more emotion and feeling though, I cant really believe him though. He needs more diaphragm less throat. More energy. I didn't like this, not speaking in terms of taste but in terms of quality of work/ caliber of work. The beat kinda goes off in certain area. His second...