This was a good start for you. Like you said, you are a Hip-Hop head and this was for fun. Seems like you are just trying to see how you can manage your own wordplay. Like others have suggested, create a concept and then just work around that. Peace.
Hey what's up Coach? Your video flow and verse was refreshing. You actually have some style to go with your craft. I'mma bout to post something new. I posted a couple things here a long time ago in the past. This is something that I just wrote tonight. Anyways, I like what you have going on. It...